Adam at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

Snowboarding On Mt. Pilcher

I found a poem in Space #3 by Alexandra from Marshall Alaska.

I like “Snowboarding On Mt. Pilcher” because she gave description like if I was there 
or if  I can see the image in my head seeing every thing.

One sentence that stand out for me is “Bumpy as a rough boat ride, I get tired of snowboarding and then I slide” I think this is cool because of how it sound like if it a challenge to get down the slope while she was skiing.

Another sentence that i like was “Falling on my behind i hurry and get up and start to slide.” This stood out for me because it show that no matter how many time you fall you get back and on the board.

I look forward to seeing what Alexandra makes next, because she actually descriptive and that helps me see an image of what is going on in the story.